Free hand

Look around
and you will find
what you did not
think to look for

Smell the air
its essence real
enough to be
seen and touched too

The war came
the people died
the soldiers fought
war based on lies

Three planes crashed
a ship sank too
lightning found scouts
Gaza dozed flat

Comments

  1. The first 3 verses I am with you, and I think them good. I get lost on the 4th trying to tie it to the first 3 while grappling with the symbolism that is just eluding my grasp. Help me.

  2. I was just spitting out what was on my mind at the moment.

    There have been the 3 plane crashes lately, a ship sank, all those boy scouts losing battles with Mama Nature and those bull dozers in Gaza.

    Weighin’ heavy on my mind.

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