In order to provide a motive for Sarah, I need a motive for Lea which means I need to define the ‘evil’ in my NaNoWriMo project. Earlier I was considering using the industrial evil invites and encourages the “I” while craftsmanship and faith promote the “we”. But that was getting rather complicated. As a background moral, it worked out well. But for this, it didn’t. So, the WIP remains a novel set in a medieval-type time period, although perhaps I will make it more of a Renaissance-like and introduce more art and music. Either way, they use swords and arrows vs guns. Although a cannon might be a good idea for the bad guys to use. And the good guys could use explosives of some sort.
As much as we writers have to concentrate on the Main Character (MC), we also have to concentrate on the antagonist, be it human, beast, or ideas. In this case, antagonist is more of a thing than a human or beast. This thing manifests itself in humans but it is the evil in control, not the person. Except for the few who really just like it that way. You know, the kind that think pouring gasoline on a cat and setting it on fire is a fun way to spend an afternoon. (as Book would say, “There’s a special hell for that”)
Anyway, I am polishing up the evil aspect, then will set up Lea, then will fix it so Sarah has a reason for this whole thing.
Maass, in his workbook, suggests that to make a character grow and be interesting, to first define one thing that would describe the protagonist (intelligent, funny, etc.), write a paragraph in which they do/act that way. Then, to stir the pot, list one thing that is the complete opposite and write a paragraph in which they do/act that way!
Sarah is…intelligent. She has a lot of book-learning in her head. For fun, she reads any book, even on the crop rotation practices in the Fulgar Plains during the last century. The opposite of intelligent is being unintelligent. Perhaps she makes bad common sense decisions? Or, because her education is all in the books, she can’t think of what to do in real life. Like, perhaps she has read a lot of books on wound healing, but when she sees one for the first time, she freaks and can’t think of what to do. Solid, reliable Sarah is now unable to have an answer.
At any rate, got some more freewriting fiction up for your perusal.