I changed my mind. Again.
I was thinking, a nasty habit I have, that it was out of place for Kelly and Grace to work on a car. Kelly is, afterall, a handywoman, not a mechanic. So now they are going to work on a different thing together.
Problem is, I am not sure what that is. Grace lives in a rental house, which is how she and Kelly meets. Grace just got a job at a construction company so what would she need Kelly’s help for there? I was thinking of having them put in a doorbell together but that is such a simple thing to do.
Originally, Kelly makes Lucy a desk. Perhaps Grace can help her with that. Right now, Kelly has a busted hand (a new addition in the rewrite) so Grace helping her with it would be logical. Hmmm.
In the original, they go together on a late afternoon job: a rabbit pen collapsed under a tree. They work on it together and Grace sees how good Kelly is. Perhaps I can keep that scene and have Grace do more work on it, since Kelly has the busted hand. Hmmm.
Okay, enough with the thinking and on to the writing!