I found out today why I was having trouble with this WIP.
I’ve come to a spot where I don’t like where it is going. I think it is moving too fast here. But I don’t know what to do about it. I did some reading of it, before and after. Did some research on transitions, etc. I’m about to read the original and see when similar events took place.
I have got to move past this point. I must. Even if it kills me or I kill it. 😮