Sifted through the rubble and made it to the beginning of Chapter 33. Ack, there are some awkwardly phrased sentences in there. Not a surprise but still, ack!
I also found plenty of ‘one step at a time’ scenes. She did this then this then this then this. As in she sat down. She took off her shoes. She picked up the book. She turned the first page. blah blah
But hey, it’s still not too bad. I am doing this via the computer screen. I’ve not printed this section out yet. I reckon I should. Just hate wasting paper, ya know?